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Fiction for Children

Raymond also enjoys writing fiction—mostly ghost stories and mystery novels for children. Over the years, he began by writing for his children, Anna, Sarah, and Luke, who loved scary stories. He often read these stories to them out on the porch in the evenings, just as his grandfather, an immigrant from Slovenia, told ghost stories from the old country to just about all the kids in the neighborhood many years ago. To date, Raymond has published through books of fiction: The Fresh Grave and Other Ghostly Stories, The Ghost of Honeymoon Creek, and Shadow Island: A Tale of Lake Superior. Writing the stories was great fun, and even more gratifying that children love the stories and novels.

For more information and to read a story or sample chapter, check out the website of Blue Horse Books, an imprint of Midwest Traditions.

The Fresh Grave: And Other Ghostly Stories


Hardcover, published 1997
Paperback, published 1997

In this collection of short humorous ghost stories, Hank and his ‘fraidy-cat sidekick, Clifford, venture forth to explore the deserted barns, ramshackle hotels, creaking gristmills, and overgrown cemeteries around the mythical small town of Myrtleville, somewhere in rural Indiana. The delightful escapades gleefully combine regional history, humor, and ghosts galore. For readers 8 and up

Word from the Publisher

“These original ghost stories, linked by the characters of Hank and Clifford, reflect a common heritage of rural America—a land once roamed by Native American bands, now dotted with small farmhouses, old gristmills, run-down barns, and, of course, cemeteries. Hank and Clifford will foil grave robbers, meet a ghostly Civil War window, encounter a long-gone religious sect, and tiptoe through a deserted hotel.”

Link to this website for the lead story of this collection:
http://www.indiana.edu/~reading/www/famres/pctogeth/ish03/grave.html

“Teenagers Hank Cantrell and his friend Cliff meet a ghostly cast of characters in this collection of stories set in a small Midwestern town. The motifs of the 10 tales are familiar—being buried alive, sacred Indian burial grounds, inability to give up a child, etc. Bial tells these stories in a straightforward manner and often with a touch of humor. In each selection, Hank becomes aware of cultural and moral values surrounding the ghosts and periods of history. Cliff, on the other hand, provides the comic relief while defending his cowardly attitude. The dialogue is a strength of this book and moves the plots forward; description is used to embellish the scenes and the two elements combine well for silent reading…A worthy purchase…—School Library Journal

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The Ghost of Honeymoon Creek

The Ghost of Honeymoon Creek, a book of fiction by Raymond Bial
Hardcover, published 2000
Paperback, published 2000

This novel by an award-winning children’s book author features the further misadventures of those two teenaged ghost-magnets: Hank and his spineless buddy Clifford who are chased by a host of ghosts through the countryside near Myrtleville. In this story, as the strive to uncover the secret of the ghost of Honeymoon Creek, the boys encounter a mysterious old lady, a blustering landlord with a dark secret (and an itchy trigger finger), a fire-breathing white bull named Lucifer, and the dimwitted Leach Brothers. All takes place around the mythical small town of Myrtleville, somewhere in rural Indiana. The themes of trustworthiness and learning to do the right thing are sure to please the discriminating selector of good books for young readers aged 8 and up —while the ghosts galore and ever-present humor will please the young readers themselves.

“Readers familiar with Bial’s The Fresh Grave (Face to Face, 1997), featuring the same two boys, will not be disappointed with this sequel. It’s a lively, entertaining, and energetic story. When a mysterious light suddenly appears in a deserted farmhouse on Old Man Crupp’s land, ghost-magnets Hank and Clifford investigate and become entangled in a case that ultimately leads to the discovery of a murder. They encounter not only a ghost, but also a shotgun-wielding landlord and a fierce-tempered bull named Lucifer that guards the nearby woods against trespassers. The interactions of the engaging, sympathetic characters create a well-balanced story. The friendship between teenager Hank and the elderly, ghostly Bonnie Hawkins is refreshing, and nicely juxtaposed against the close friendship Hank has with Clifford and also with Rosie, a romantic interest. Bonnie helps Hank discover the love and respect that he has for the land, and Hank helps her find inner peace when he solves the mystery surrounding her sister’s murder. Loose ends are wrapped up at the end; the ghosts can finally rest in peace, and Hank and Rosie’s friendship has become closer than ever. This page-turner will keep readers looking forward to the further exploits of these two ghost sleuths.”— School Library Journal

“Fifteen-year-old Hank has grown up on a farm in western Indiana, but he fears that his father will have to sell the land before he’s old enough to farm it himself. Goaded by his cowardly friend Clifford to investigate the strange light that has been sighted on the old Hawkins place, Hank faces a crazy bull and a strange old woman who appears to have some knowledge of the past and of the future. His courage and loyalty pay off, leaving Hank with a bright future ahead. Readers who enjoy ghost stories will find the suspense satisfying and the main character a sympathetic young hero. Though the writing has its share of clichés and the ending is predictable, this novel is one of the few to deal with characters growing up in contemporary rural America. Hank and Clifford appeared in Bial’s book of short stories, The Fresh Grave (1997). Illustrations have been contributed by Anna Bial. Carolyn Phelan, Booklist, ALA


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Shadow Island: A Tale of Lake Superior


Paperback, Bluehorse Books: Midwest Traditions, 2006

"Welcome to the adventures of three girls-Amanda, her kid sister Sally, and her best friend Roxanne-as they find themselves trapped on Shadow Island...a strange and desolate tiny island near a sleepy resort somewhere on Lake Superior. To have any chance to get away, they will have to explore the mysterious and long-abandoned Stardust Hotel. Unfortunately for the three of them, the old Victorian building is not quite as deserted as everyone thought. As in all of Bial's popular ghost stories, the young protagonists will encounter a host of ghosts as they dash from one terrifying encounter to the next. In the process, they will learn a lot about themselves, about friendship and family, and about the importance of striving to do the right thing even in trying circumstances."

Read the BookLoons review.

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